The adventure at Spencer Park

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.

• The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
• Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
• A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.

Last week on Friday about 150 kids and I went to the Spencer Park to explore the Lagoon, Beach and the playground!!!  So when we arrived we got set into groups of 4 that were put on our hand.  I was number 3 after that they would have made shore that we are in the correct group.  After that we were put in 3A, 3B and 3C.  I was in 3B with Miss Day.  

The first thing that my group did was have a 15 minute play in the playground.  Then we left to the lagoon.  We walked for a long time and found some left overs from horses (Horse poop).   Then we got to stand in this tiny hut that we had to take turns in we found some weird stuff in the hut.( Evil stuff )  

The we started to walk back when we got back we ate our lunch.  After that we went to the beach to collect some stuff to make a sculpture out of the things that we have found.  I started to collect some stuff with a friend in room 10 she is very kind and loves to share.  We found many things but we had to chuck many out because we had too much then we started to walk back then went back to school.

I didn’t really enjoy the trip because we had to keep walking and walking until we are puff so I was quite puffed and sad that we didn’t get to have a break at the park cause the only break that we had was at the start.