I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, November 8, 2017
Among the hidden - Send the feedback
Hey guys I am back and today and I am going be asking for feedback. I am looking for some feedback for a person named Mark Garner from the book 'Among The Hidden'. The author of this books is Margaret Peterson Haddix. I have some information about Mark and would like some more information or something that can improve my work. I take Mark as a stubborn boy because he always wants to annoy the family to take his anger away. I am looking for feedback on how much information I am giving you about Mark Garner.
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Hi Lasa, I really your character Mark Garner and what you find about him but next time see if other word are make sense.
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