Friday, May 5, 2017
The life that wonders in letters.
Welcome back to another blog post. On this blog post I am going to be telling you a story in the world war. This story that I made up was a story about letters that the dad had sent them. This story is meant to put you in the eyes of the boys that were reading the letters.
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Well done Lasa, you have really captured the mood in your story. You have used interesting vocabulary like "thrusted into the air.....". You have used Then as a sentence starter too much. This is a boring word. THink of alternative sentence starters to add impact to your writing.
ReplyDeleteOk Mr Scott I will do better sentence starters in my story.
DeleteThank you for commenting!!!