Monday, May 13, 2019

The Two Diary's

This is the photos I wrote about.
Every Friday most of the classes get together and do multiple things.  One of the tasks we do together is Creative Writing.  We had to write about the picture that was given to us.  Here is my story:

Diary 2019
It was the year 2019 when life was like a dream.  We had hard earnt money.  We also have different gadgets such as PlayStations, Flat screens, Laptops, iPhones, Samsungs and much more!  I lived in a small place in New Zealand called Akaroa.  It was a beautiful place with a heart-stopping view.  Light blue ocean and golden grass.  It creates a perfect view.  It was like a dream come true.

Diary 2029
It was the year 2029.  The world was best described as madness,  the population grew tremendously. There were people starving on the streets.  The government did not care at all,  his only interests were himself.  We worked day and night and still got nothing.  It was as God abandoned us and left our bodies to rot.  All that was beautiful became ugly.  The sun hadn't been seen since 2020.  It had been covered by clouds.  We had all forgotten what peace felt like.  It was a nightmare seeing children die from starvation.


  1. Lasa, thank you for sharing this piece of work to your blog! Your creative writing gave me chills even the second time reading it. I think you touched on some very large topics and ideas and created beautiful descriptions to get your message across. You used a variety of adjectives to describe your two different time frames and I'm impressed with what you created in such a short amount of time.

    Wonderful work!
    - Miss Birtch

  2. Lasa
    This is a beautiful piece of writing... I loved reading it. You have a real talent with words.

    I’d love to read more of your work.

  3. Malo Lasa. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your piece of creative writing. You kept the reader engaged through descriptive langauage and hence, wanting to read more. I would love to know what eventuated in 2039!


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