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Friday, August 18, 2017

The Day Electronic's save the day.

The Day Electronic's save the day.

I was a man, the man who sails to India, Somalia and many more different countries in a slow, boring cargo boat. They call me Speedster because when I was behind the wheel I was really fast and because I make irritating car noises when I think that we are going fast.   I loved the sea because it shone like a gem shining in the dark and the sun brighter every time it got closer to me.


I thought how can my life get better or should I say worse. I saw pirates boarding the ship so I went as fast as I could to the emergency button.  But it was too late because they had already reached me.


“Hand it over now. I am the captain and you’re an ugly nerd.  Now hand the hat and the key” said the pirate.  He hit the emergency button without even knowing. “Haha” I laughed as he has just made a mistake.  “Bye Bye Captain.” I said


About one minute after robots came out extinguishing every pirate that they saw.  They told the captain (pirate) to look out the window and saw his fellow’s he had been scared to death with and had a horrified face to come with it. Then he returned the key and the hat immediately to me the end.

I think that this piece of writing is really good and hope you will enjoy reading it just saying click below to watch the video.


1 comment:

  1. HI this is a really good video and it looks like that was really hard for the Actors to perform and the ship it is just amazing.
    Next time you should put more movie themes on there and brightness it was a bit dall.

    Did you get this off the web or did you make it you Self

    Thanks Lucy from yaldhurst modal school

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