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Thursday, August 24, 2017

The Dream Giver

W.A.L.T rewrite what we have seen


It was the dawn of night when everyone is as quiet as a cat hunting for food.  He inhaled (breathing) then exhaled then looked upon the star’s, they are like nothing he has have ever seen before they bloomed in the dark night.  

He was doing his normal job, as normal but he was dressed as he came from the dirty streets.  He wore a rack as pants and goggles so no one got blind when they looked at him.  His hair, wait he has no hair that is what scares me the most.  His name was the Dream Giver a.k.a Bob.

He opened the door slightly to make sure no one was awake, they were all sound asleep.  He plunged his sack full of eggs on Jake’s bed.   There he was dreaming, giving, loving and many more to the children.  

While he was relaxing he did not notice that there was a book next to Jake’s bed, so while he was asleep he kicked an egg off the bed and it cracked open on the boogie man (book). Bob’s nemesis a.k.a Boggie he was the nightmare giver.  All was lost as they all had nightmare’s.

It was up to  Bob to stop them...




1 comment:

  1. Hi Lasa you done a really really god job, but next time make your story shorter because the viewers will be bored.

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